Sms - English is faster

I was struggling with my Dad. He wanted me to help sms in Chinese.
So we had a hard time figuring out the han yu pin yin.

Initially:

"hi, ni hao ma. shou dao ni de xin xi wo hen gao xin, ni zai na li zhuo gong kai xing ma? I zai Pasir Ris hen gao xin, xia ci yong English ok? hui bi ciao kuai wan"

Then we found out that it is supposed to be:

"hai, ni hao ma. Shou dao ni de xun xi wo hen gao xing, ni zai na li zuo gong kai xing ma? Wo zai Pasir Ris hen gao xing, xia ci yong ying wen hao ma? Hui bi jiao kuai wan"

Terrible.